This is good sweetie,ya,guys suk somtimes!

Why are you with him?

I love the way your poems rhyme. I wish I had that skill. Another great poem.

Good poem...love it
5/5

U r so gloomy

good poem

liked it much

Touching and very emotional piece. Truly good write.

Hey you don't deserve to be hit... but i know the pain to try and leave when you love someone alot -5/5- great poem

A superbly written poem, with passion, power and pain. Poem is effective, because it is personal experience from you. You have dealt with this situation through fresh eyes. Lots of imagery and deep emotion in this. Many writers, artists and poets suffer, with many tragedies in their lives. Keep talking and writing about it to get it all out of your system. Prayer helps too. There are many doors in life to walk through, but you must knock at each door for an answer. God is waiting for your call. Keep sharing.

This another nice piece. i liked the flow of it.

well done.

life is beautiful and tough at the same time...

This poem is well written. I think that the sadness in our lives inspires the best peices of our work, so be grateful that something can come out of your sadness. Whether it be poetry, or songs, or dancing, singing, just flat our enjoying yourself, it's better than collapsing in on yourself and not letting anyway help you at all. Anyway, 5/5 good poem!