This poem is very sad. dieing is such a sad word. its never a good word to say to anyone. but i love it.

Yes you musn't say that katie..oh my garnett..what were you thinking? =]..lmao..i love you more than my life..<3

This poem is very blunt and sad. It is so hard to deal with the loss of a loved one it is so definete. Although the person may not be here physically, they will live forever inside your heart and your memories. Good job on this heartfelt write.

I can really relate to this poem it reminds of my friend who past just over a year ago.
well, this poem was beautfiful.
the flow was fantastic too.

i walk outside
look up to the sky and..
scream.
birds fly out of trees
and i pray to god you didn't hear me.
it doesn't matter now because you're gone.

i really liked that stanza. you chose your words wisely.
job well done.

-Ashlei.

So sad,,sniff
nut its its good,,i pictured something on my mind while reading it,,
5/5