Very deep and written on fantastic way. You expressed emotions greatly and intertwined that with so vivid descriptions, I really love this, so creative and unqiue. Few lines are totally effective and third stanza is my favorite one.
Well done, I honestly think that you did amazing job with this poem, atmosphere that you created is also original. Simply beautiful.

Very powerful poem, with tones of deep darkness. Intense write, filled with great descriptions that created very vivid imagery in my mind.
Every stanza holds amount of fantastically expressed emotions. The piece is effective from the beginning to the end.
My favorite stanza is:

-I sense myself falling though darkened abyss.
I can hear only slight whispers, and faint laughter,
But I can feel nothing for I am numb inside and out.
Darkness, sinister darkness, blinds me, completely.-

The repetition of the line
-Spiraling, Swirling dark souls-
is quite powerful.

All in all, greatly done!
5/5 from me

Really enjoyed this poem. The flow was great and the emotion strong. Very good imagery, a great read and leaves a sense of something being there. Creative.

Sole.

"It is ironic that only as I begin to die,
That I have just found the desire to Live.
Spiraling, Swirling dark souls,
Grab at me, slowly tearing me apart."

This is my favorite line. It captures what I think every human goes through when they think about death. The fact that you managed to capture this amazes me and I hope I can be just as observant as you.

Very deep and verry powerful, you got the talent and i see it in your writes and i realy love the ending 5/5

It was good...but i didn't sence a really strong amotion to it....good job tho
***aLy***

This poem has a very hard meaning. It shows what the difficulties of life can do to a lonley spirit. I liked the imagary parts, and the rhymes and choosing of words were ok. You didn't use rhymes and that's a shame. I'm sure that with rhymes it would flow better.
Nice work 4/5