Comments : Die For Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very much enjoyed this read, the emotion and sorrow was felt so painfully.

    "I said it once,
    Ill say it again.
    I will die for love,
    Please forgive my sins."

    The ending was so deep and powerful. To walk away without animosity is the best result to a bad situation thats for sure. Well done on a awesome write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Munequita

    Short but deep i like it but keep ur head up

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Again a simple poem yet emotions are really relatable to anyone.. you make poets see that although you don't use much vocabulary you can still spread out what you feel.. nice one =]