This is personal, all those word you put in is unbelievable, cause I wish could write something like that to express myself so deep. Youre talent and let yourself live, don't let it wait.

Really well written poem hun. can relate to every word. the desriptive words you used are very well choosen. A deep and personal poem that leaves the reader in awe. well done 5/5 check out my stuff if you get a chance please
Dee xxx

Wow this was a really sad poem but i loved nice job.