Damn, dat is crazy but u r good, though!

Wow, evil. Lol great poem.

Wow. carazay! that is the darkest poem i've read in a long time....

Awesome! that's a sweet poem, great work, keep it up!!

WOW!!!
This is very confronting-but written very very well!!!!

5/5!!!!

In the first stanza, 3rd line, is "out" supposed to be repeated like it is??? just curious.

But yeah-a definate 5/5!