IT COULD OF BEEN BETTER IF YOU PUT YOURSELF INTO IT MORE..BUT IT WAS GOOD

Last line first stanza

YOUR fears I'm there to hide. And make sure to use an apostrophe when saying I've and capitalize I. Last stanza second line use know not no.

Okay now that I've gotten that out of the way. :) The reason I edited this one was because it was smaller. It was a good poem. I thought it to be odd that the first stanza had all rhyming lines and the second two didn't. It was a good poem though. Three.

I wish that I could find my soul mate and that i can have someone who loves me as much as i love them. I'm so excited for you.