This was a bit vague and I wasnt sure what you were talking about but that is why I liked it. It was easy for me to draw my own assumptions and relate it to my own life. Well done, it was a great read.

I like this poem..it is real and thats what poetry is about..

I know writing this poem you felt emotion
but reading this poem it wasn't there for me
I need to know every tidbit of this feeling to
fully understand
3.7/5

You don't use metaphors and anything that other poets do when they write poems that's why it's easy to understand.. some poets always use metaphors that everyone can't understand it... but ya this is only an ok poem.. i didn't feel so much emotions.. =]