Awsome poem, and definately one i can relate to. im enjoying reading your stuff =]

Its kinda cute, lol. I like the emotion thats in it. Theres some grammar problems, the first 3 lines have "you're" when it should be "your", and "i" is a pronoun that is always capitalized. Also, the overall motive is slightly weak. It seems as though you wrote it just to do it, not because you were actually feeling the emotions you describe.

Awww' sad but nice onee. i can feel you in this one.

Wonderful poem, i liked it

Aww cuute!
hang in there(:

Very nice work. i loved the emotions i get from reading this. Nice work. Shanik