I love this poem it's short but sharp. i'm impressed (:

I really love this poem!! its short but it has a lot of felling in it =) keep up the good work

A very unique poem
and a very unique structure. :]
sad and simple, short, but full of emotion.
i liek it. :] 5/5.

Ohh that was painful obviously hehe... the words seemed so deep and very emotional.. keep up the good work 5/5

Wow
this
is
so
now
one
of
my
Fav.s
Thnx
5
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

Your a good writer. nice job.

I liked the repetion and i liked the end,

i have a poem called "pain" too hehe