Comments : Love's Like Suicide

  • 12 years ago

    by XBroKenXyetXHeReX

    I really like this poem...really good job and the ryhming in it was good to. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow. i love this poem, its so sad but very awesome. i could feel strong emotions. great job!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem mina, love the flow and the grammer is perfect, its a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow... its so well writen and i love it... 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    I liked this alot. I guess because I can relate to it. Love is a raw emotion. Leaving us all vulnerable to its pain.

    Good stuff.

    Michael

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow!!! That's sooo sweet, I loved the whole poem and the tittle's great... *thumbs up*

  • 11 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow...

    And you've left me here all alone
    To feed the emptiness of my soul
    But this feeling is overwhelming me
    Like my heart will never again be whole

    ^ i understand this......once a heartbreaks, it can never be put together fully...you lose some of the pieces.....great job on this stanza

    And every line etched upon my skin
    Is a path leading to a broken heart
    Every tear that trials down my face
    Is another reason why we broke apart

    ^ this is the best thing i have read all day....this is seriously amazing. (u have trials, i think u mean trails)

    seriously, an amazing poem......love is like suicide........how horrible....we're all so vulnerable. you can feel that in this poem. great job, hun. keep up the amazing work

  • 11 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    Freaking amazing. the love's like suicide at the end was a great thing.

  • 11 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    Check your messages!

  • 10 years ago

    by Aaron Martin

    Aww this is very well written, incredibly expressive. i feel like im being pulled into your pain.