That was so touching you must really miss your reall mom
(really good poem)

Excelent poem lots of emotion very well writen :) 5/5

All of your poems are real and i like that about you..and just focus on what you want..and if the poeple that should be there for you,and they aren't,let them be and presue your dream..and its crazy what you said about having kids and living a great life..becuz i have the same dream too..but its hard to find a girl..that would be down with me..there is only afew that are real..

WOW......very very touching poem, so has so much energy in it, just flowing with emotion. great job Kortney, =)