I likes this!! a bunch! lol!

I like this alotalot alot!!5/5

Good word usage and imagery 5/5

I love how you bring out the plot of the surrounding in hte poem, very cool, very uplifting.

You're very smooth with your words, you know? And the things you write about are ALWAYS great.
I think this one is one of my favourite out of your writings. I think the flow might've been better at one part, but besides that it was really well written.
-Krystal[: