I'm better off asleep
Than dreaming while awake
With nothing more than one wish
To be with you again!

so painful and sad

nice lines

This poems good. nice work

This poem is very good. Nice job.

~love~

The ending is so deep and truthful! and that is why I'm rating it a 5/5

--Unknown--

Wow, this very awesome poem, so much love and desires.
"I'm better off asleep
Than dreaming while awake
With nothing more than one wish
To be with you again!"
i liked this part very much...its fantastic

I really like this peom!
So sweet and touching.
The end is great.
Enjoyed reading it!
Take care

Wow, this is fabulous!!.. I love the ending.. And i enjoy reading your work!!.. Keep it ups!!..

Aww, such a sweet love poem! Yes..it does feel sooo good to be in love! You have captured that feeling really well!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, this poem is really emotional.
5\5