Hmmm....interesting. Most wouldn't even try to tackle this subject. There's a sense of despair over this one, but the end seems to stumble over its words. Over all a good piece.

Admiring you as you run

threating remarks to about shooting you with a gun.

i really liked that part it was good. kind of odd but in a good way ^^

I like your style of writing. Do you like Bob Dylan? You remind me of him. He is a great writer of lyrics.

I know I already commented but I like reading this again. Good work