This is sweet and so true i would dedicate it to someone special in my life as well.

Aww
cutee
this poem was lovely
the only problems I found were
in the 5th and 6th stanza
the 5th stanza had a bit of a flow problem
the 6th stanza wasn't much of a rhyme
it was sort of forced
no biggie though
lovely poem
5/5
kaila

A beautiful write and another well written
piece. The flow was perfect and the words
were deep and so full of emtion. the ending
fit quite perfectly and was my favorite part!
great write. 5/5.

Hehe.. such a simple yet meaningful poem.. any guy would melt if this poem was offered to them.. ur always talking about marriage for such an early age.. but oh well.. love does make ppl do crazy things =D nice poem

Aww !! Lovely. Its such a sweet poem and touching. You've described your love in such a strong and beautiful way. Its one of my favorites.
5/5