Awh, this is cute. It's also a really well written poem. 5/5 =)

-Taylor

I LIKE THE WAY YOU PUT THEM WORDS TOGETHER!..NICE JOB!!

A beautiful poem Mike, very well written, 5/5

This is so powerful
i love the use of such beautiful imagery
great work :)

WOW!!!!
this is my favorite one of them all
I loved every word u wrote
keep it up 5/5

So pure and simple, the way you are
No one comes close
No one by far
[i love this]

Mike This poem painted such a beautiful picture in my head you have no idea great words! I really like this poem 5.5

Mike,

every word i read of yours, i fall more and more in love with you! you are simply amazing. you have brought such a beautiful thing into this world. never hide that light from anyone! <3 <3

This one is awesome. Favorite. =] lol
Good job!

This is so very sweet! Keep writing!

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Wow, I can really picture this AMAZING use of words:) keep up the good work

It sounds so beautiful, i love the words you chose
Kelliexx

I loved this piece. the flow was amazing!!!!!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamazing ending too. i loved it tons!!!!

Once again' i'm quiet speechless...