Comments : Endless loss

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Bravooooo!!!!
    Wonderfully expressed so touchy feelings...
    U r toooo Good

  • 16 years ago

    by Tine

    Heey.. yet again as promised i checked out your work. I still love it! nomination is in.. =) and keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Hey you
    i was waitin for u new poems
    and once again it a great one
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    Hi , hassan i m sana ..i also love to right poems...but i love your all poems...soo much touchy feelingsss - GREAT WORK !

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a very nice poem. I found it filled with emotions and the flow was very nice. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is a very touching poem, so much pain portrayed here...

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Another great poem that is so wonderful! I really like the title, it fits the poem perfectly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    What I felt in this poem is what I feel in my real life..How the shadows are growing on the wall and how his face appear on the window on the rainy day..

    I wish I could express my feelings as beautiful as you can, but because I can not, the best thing to do is enjoy your work. Thanks for this poem..

  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Another night cOMES with old sorrows;
    Belonging to my one sided love;
    Bringing thousandS of emotions,
    Another tear fALLS down.

    Another morning with A lonely silence;
    Giving THE darkness to my faded memories;
    Closing all the doors towardS her,
    Another hope tired IS now.

    Another evening came with AN old scene;
    Bringing her face in front of me;
    Informing about my dark tomorrow,
    Another fear embraced me.

    Another love is dying soon;
    Keeping all its pains;
    Leaving MORE unsaid words,
    Another life destroyed in love

    AGAIN IT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM. X