I like this.
well done =)

Excellent poem Fran, very funny. I agree with Frank that it begs to be extended.
Still 5/5

Lol. this is cute.

Yes SHe was and the scary part is we dont really grow up HAHA that was a funny poem well done Fran

Grant

Cute!!!

Nice poem. Very funny, has classic nursery rhyme quality to it.

Don't know she has not answered my email. Very well done.

Haha this put a smile on my face haha it was great 5/5

Wow!It is amazing.I enjoyed it to the core.The last line says it all.U hit a 5/5.

Haha this is so funny. I like the stlye, 5/5. Em

Very cute Fran :-)

Aw!!! Really cute.... I was totally delighted by this poem. lol... It made me smile!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Nice poem :), i think maybe sometimes old age when teenagers start to annoy you, but you can't be sure if God is a she or he oO

great poem