I like the meaning that I got from this..great write! =]

Whoa, that's poppin off the hook wit some incredible love right there, man! THIS IS GOOD, TOTALLY DIGGIN THEM WORDS U PUT IN THEM!

Nice poem, and can relate to that easily. Short sweet and beautiful. Well written thoroughly enjoyed keep it up :) 5/5

That was really good
but u can always fix somethings
i'd like to talk to you sometime like on msn or something

Good poem... 5/5