End of it

by Childofthecherry   Jan 19, 2008


I saw you turn and
leave followed the sound
of your footsteps down
the corridor.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    A superb and simple poem that hides a real depth of emotion. When read alonside the title I can almost taste the feeling of loneliness, hopelessness and pain.

    Very easy for readers to overlook the real message 'between the lines' Well done!

    Neil.

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