The use of words could be slightly better. Don't get me wrong it is a good poem and has very good potention, but i think with just a little more time and tweaking it could be much better. You have good potentional. 4/5

Signed,
Alexander

Splendid poem, very touching, very beautiful, you don't have many poems here but all of them are very unique and suits my type

keep writting and i hope everything is ok with you

may Allah bless you

I get an overwhelming sense of sarcasm with this poem, which makes me want to laugh. I know it's a serious subject but it's funny.
In terms of poetic originality there's not much of it here. In terms of poetic device, it hasn't any of that either. It's a pretty average poem overall. What I did like though, apart from the sarcasm was the genuine emotion. That's something that even I can't deny.
Oh and I commented on your most recent poem because you didn't state which one you wanted me to comment on.
Keep writing.

This poem is another piece that many can relate to. We come across many fake "friends" who make us believe that they care. The flow here was a bit rocky because of all the slang you used. I think that if you wrote it in a high level language it would sound better. Nice work 4/5

Aren't friends just the best!?

Once again - I can relate so the poem was by all means worth the time...