A very nice song. :] I think your message
gets across really well. and the chorus was
my favorite part of the song. :] beautiful. 5/5.

I loved it! The message behind it was so true and something I am sure many can relate with. It would be beautiful if you add some music, I would be curious to hear how it would sound. It all flowed beautifully and nothing seemed forced.

"Do you know who you are?
Do you really know yourself?
You've spent so may years
Being somebody else"
^LOVED IT!

well done *5/5*

VERY IMPRESSIVE! It's great. I love the words you say verses the words you think! It's really great! I enjoyed that aspect of it. So good.
*ME*

Nice song.. hey put a video on youtube while ur singing that song.. the chorus is fantastic! so ya tell me if u put it on youtube and i'll watch it! a poet and a composer.. wow very impressive!

I absolutely fell in love with the whole poem after I just read the bridge =]
Wow, you stunned me with it. Wonderful job in this song, and especially the third verse. I don't think it's something I'd hear mainstream, but I think it's something that would be put on a CD.

You definitely should find someone to sing this =]

Great job,
5/5
~Stephen White