Dream Girl

by Cale   Jan 22, 2008


I'm walking and I see the girl of my dreams.
The girl that when she walks by makes me beam.

When she walks her blonde hair flys in the air.
Every guy is watching but she walks without a care.

She keeps walking right toward me.
With her beauty that is easy to see.

She walks by, smiles, and says "Hi"
That leaves me speechless and all i can do is walk by.

As I walk by I look into her blue eyes.
Thinking how i want her but its not worth a try.

This girl has to be an angel from heaven.
The girl i have dreamed about since i was seven.

She drops her book and i pick it up and she smiles, says thanks, and gives me a peck on the cheek.
When she does that I am swept off my feet.

I look at her and we both smile.
We sit and just stare at each other for a while.

She starts to walk away and I just stand there.
Thinking how shes the most beautiful girl I have ever seen anywhere.

It would be amazing if this girl was mine.
I would have a girl thats one of a kind.

I cant wait till the day she knows how i feel.
I could stop dreaming and have a love that is real!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hmm cale,
    this feeling is all to fimiliar
    I love and hate it all at once
    Some suggestions though
    I would not focus on rhyming
    if your rhymes aren't perfect
    or if there are no rhymes at all
    it's okay your poem will still be good
    because your forced rhyme is getting
    in the way of the beauty in this poem
    I like what the poem represents because
    everyone can relate
    nice poem
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really nice poem. if it is about real life you really need to tell her. how do you know that she doesnt feel the same way about you. anyway this is a great poem. 5/5

    Kalee