Very cute, I did think some things could use a little work but I dk maybe its just me. Anyway I liked it ^_^

Wow this is so cute...
I could relate to it in a way...^_^
great job...5/5

-DENISE

Aww...it was cute!!!
good job =)

Alex this is amazing!!like incredible amazing.
i'm so sorry if this really happened to you but i'm glad you wrote it yeah this is going on my favorites.5/5 love!<3

A beautiful, heartfelt poem. I can feel the ra emotion. Well written. 5/5

Awww..... that was really sweet! i like it alot! =]

Loved it! so sad but cute!
xo

I definatly feel the emotion in this poem. it rox!!