Great poem.
very meaningful.
5/5
=]

The flow was really good the wording was good too, you have done a good job, keep it up 5/5

This is so just fantastic kyle it is so great. good flow and everythhing
i voted it a 5
~taryn~

Wow kyle, that wuz really interesting. it wuz really good. 5/5 :-)

Wow kyle, that wuz really interesting. it wuz really good. 5/5 :-)

Wow. is pretty much all i can say. it hit me hard. its really good. i think its my favorite. good job kyle. sorry

Wow.... expressed all kinds of feelings
i love the ending! its my favorite part(:

Dang...holy sprinkles! i love that. that is by far the deepest meaning of any poem ive read. 5/5 *if i could id rate more!*

This is a good one keep up the good work, it shows alot of feelings, and how the person feels......

Omg amazing truly gorgeous. Your a brilliant writer. I've never read a poem that hold so much emotion as this. Just amazing. 5/5

Your poems are so captivating. I wish I was as good of a writer as you.

5/5

Super Duper!
I love it!
You have sooo much talent.