Great work on the poem love it

Wow i actually read the hole thing and i felt like i was actually there it rhymed snd it was just beutifull thisis a cool , lovely poem and i think it was more than like i think its love
loved the poem

So far i am totally in love with this poem =} The way you wrote it, made it come to life with truth and thats something thats hard for some poets to do. So very good job

Three years finally passed,
My feelings for you still last,
I came back with a different image,
But still the same person,
When I finally saw you again, seriously, my heart beat so fast,
Whatever it is that is in you,
Makes me so nervous, the little courage I had, suddenly crushed,
As if it was an angel's touch,
You're someone so powerful that my mind & heart clashed...

^^my absolute favorite part...idk why exactly, but something about it made me read it twice!

Another beautifully written piece so far (tell me when you've completed it i would really like to finish this)
5/5

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Nice!