Forever

by mHaRiE   Jan 23, 2008


Look how time pass my dear
can't believe we reached a year
seems that the things i fear
in time was cleared.

we've been through good and bad
some tried to hinder, like my dad
but strength is what we had
and together we surpassed.

so many trial we faced
everything changed its pace
some tried to fight and race
just to own your pretty face.

though sometimes, your actions
express that you don't care at all
somehow that's the way things go
anyway, i know together we'll flow

our life ain't that easy
ways are rugged and so humpy
yet, we've passed our very first year
could we change it to "Forever" my dear?

dedicated to:
N.A.N.N

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  • 17 years ago

    by mHaRiE

    Thanks to all who gave comments, i really appreciated it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I hope it does last forever!
    good luck
    i love the poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by SUSPEKT

    Great work on the poem love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Beatrice

    Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5