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by mHaRiE Jan 23, 2008 category : Love, romance / first love
Look how time pass my dear can't believe we reached a year seems that the things i fear in time was cleared. we've been through good and bad some tried to hinder, like my dad but strength is what we had and together we surpassed. so many trial we faced everything changed its pace some tried to fight and race just to own your pretty face. though sometimes, your actions express that you don't care at all somehow that's the way things go anyway, i know together we'll flow our life ain't that easy ways are rugged and so humpy yet, we've passed our very first year could we change it to "Forever" my dear?dedicated to: N.A.N.N
by mHaRiE
Thanks to all who gave comments, i really appreciated it!
by Kaila
I hope it does last forever! good luck i love the poem!
by SUSPEKT
Great work on the poem love it
by Beatrice
Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5