Wow wonderful imagery
in the last line,i just wanted to point out thats its spelled tempt.
great work nonethless,
take care
Lisa

Really wonderfull!!
5/5

P.S
u shud try n write some love poems cuz u write in a really good way; ur talented

Excellent job, i enjoyed reading this poem
Your a talented writter, this piece was very well written
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5/5 Keep up the great work

Woah.. that was very powerful.
Great Job!

Wow...x.x...all i can say iz wow...well not exactly. great poem so full of emotion keep up great worx

Wow...
Powerful and filled with excellently expressed emotions. Dark, intense and enjoyable write from the beginning to the end. I like the atmosphere that you created, it is haunting in a way.
Keep up :)

I know this feeling too well. It is perfectly expressed into "words"!