Great work on the poem love it

OMG! I LOVE THIS POEM ITS AND I REALLY THOUGHT THE PART WHEN YOU SAID"CANT STOP THINKING ABOUT YOU MEMORIES PRINTED IN THE BACK OF MY MIND" AW THAT IS SO SWEET! GREAT WRITE!!!...=]

Nice work, good imagery

Good job!
keep writing!

Pooja

WOWSERS that is a very awsome write and i hope the person you wrote that about nos how much you care!!!!

This is a really great poem. I loved reading it. Great job. Shanik

Your so hot, you leave burn marks on my fingers

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I would change hot to another word. Or just change the first part completely. I think a metaphor or simile would work good here. :] "Your skin is like flames leaving burn marks on my fingers." Something like that. :]

i never felt this way before

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It should say I've instead of I. :]

when i touch, your warmth heals my pain

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This part doesn't make that much sense.. maybe say "When we touch" for the beginning.

you is all i think of, knowing this burning love

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"You're all I think of" would make a whole lot more sense. :]

I think this was a very heartfelt poem, it just had a few grammar errors. They're small though and easily fixed. :] Great poem!

Cayce