Comments : My butterfly

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    So sweet!
    I love it and I am sure your girl will love it too!
    So fly my butterfly,
    Fly very high.
    Don't be afraid
    And don't be shy

    these lines I loved most!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    WOW!!!
    wut can i say?????
    the one ur writing for is really lucky cuz ur so sweet n ur poems r amazing
    5/5

    P.S
    congrtes on getting the 4th award ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Aww so cute and abosolutely adorable! love the poem peep keep up great work ^^!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Beautiful adorable sweet n loving, u did a gr8 job..Such a lovely poem..
    5/5
    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Salwa

    Awwwwww, so pretty. it warms my heart and melts my soul when i read this one......

    well done.

    salwa~

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Great work i like it soo much it's really expressive. keep the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Very sweet. I love the analogy. You obviously really love this person very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    O My God....THat wAs vEry SwEet...aS a ReaDer iT tOucHed My HeaRt DeeP fOr sUre yOur BuTTerFLy wiLL lOve u eVen BeTteR...i aLso nOtiCed yOu aRe a VerY suPporTive tYpe Of PerSon tO tHose PeOple u LoVed...Very EnlighTeniN tO thOse PeoPle whO hAve lOst theIr fAtes in lOve...KeEp uP tHe gOod Work..tc aLwayz..xx

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    This is so very sweet! Whose is this person? they must be great. Continue writing, your great at it.

    XxXKristie MarieXxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    This is one of my favourites

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Fly my butterfly,
    Fly very high.
    Don't be afraid
    And don't be shy.
    Spread your wings,
    Go toward the sky.
    Shine the whole universe,
    Color it with your dye.
    The world has to see
    With its own eyes.
    That our love is strong,
    Our love isn't a lie.

    I love this stanza, this piece is so original and new... great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    This is so sweet and beautiful. i can tell you truly and deeply care for this person. wow, keep up the amazing work. flow was great too. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very complicated I think and I liked the read. It proves how fragile the vessel is of a lovers heart. It spills itself out willingly upon the page and makes for a good bundle of emotions that made the momment of reading it a joy. Keep up the good writes