Wow, this poem;;;IS AMAZING!!!

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hmm, wow.

Ummmm....?????
first poem like this?
i almost want to call u a liar.
that was a damn good poem.
super sexi and super hot.
and the writing itself.
u had pretty good form and flow.
i'd be crazy if i didn't give u a 5!

^^great poem...they said it all already! 5/5!

OMG that was sooooooooo good. I swear. Yeah, I agree, I first thought you were lying, but ... nvm. WOW.

Wow like totally freakin awesome

Yes, great!

I think that the rythm could have used a bit of work, but other than that it was good. I could really get all the images into my head ;)

What they said=) 5/5

Wow this is amazing. first poem like this?? woah; like they said, i could call you a liar. keep it up, you're really good at this writing

This was good, it wasnt just another guilty pleasure or confession. there was real passion in this. it was beautiful.

--TheGothicAlbino

Wow that was an awesome poem keep writing