Comments : No More Happiness

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I cant believe no one has rated or commented on this! it amazing
    And on your travels remember this,
    ignorance is painful bliss.

    No more happiness you will find,
    not in your soul not in your mind.

    both of those should be made into quotes. they are full of so much emotion and are breathtaking.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    This is a great poem and yes i love the ending... Karma will get you! karma can do some pretty amazing things...anyway great poem and 5.5!

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    You've got a real gift for words. i loved this one!!