Break from me

by TwistedDancingCorpse   Jan 26, 2008


Dancing around the graves
fighting back emotion filled waves
feeling the screams on my lips
darkness consumes the final kiss
Lifting her white hand from the blood on the ground
I know something inside has to be found
the breath by my heart
soon to be torn apart
demons screaming my name
as her tears fall down like rain
I couldn't save her from me
Im a monster, dont you see
Break through your misery
Break away from me

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  • 16 years ago

    by ephemera

    This was really good. I think you did a really good job with the scene you created. That line, "break away from me" would more likely make me want to be with the vampire because it's sorta beckoning in a way. Awesome job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    This is written so well. It made my skin feel all tingly.

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