I like this one too. although you started rhyming[[or however you spell it. haha]] and then stoped. i think you should stick to one type of poem. either rhyme or free verse or whatever. don't try to mix them....but anyways.. good poem. it had great meaning. :P

That's so beautiful. very very deep but at the same time simple and pretty. lots of people can relate!

The ending was good, because of the randomness in it, the way it didn't rhyme with the rest of the poem.

I liked it. it was romance and tragedy all balled up in one. rock on due. lol =)

This was short but so sweet and powerful. it was amazing. goodjob. you fit all the details and emotion into a short but beautifully writeen poem.

--aprilsconspiracy

Absolutely amazing, and so true (unfortunaltely), I feel I have the same problems with guys.

But great poem anways!!!

XX3 Nia

I'm so sorry for being 3 years late. I haven't been able to get into my account, until today. :)
I actually ran into a similar situation like this poem two weeks ago. It was nice yet sad. You did a nice job with this.