Hmmmm
I read it twice to get it, lol
really gr8 one
5/5

Though it is without rhythm but a nice poem
5/5
cheers
biya

Amazingly true....

How sincere....Yeah, I can pretty much relate to it. Great poem. Honest Luck.

Sarah

I love your writing i cant help but read it!
i loved the ending perfect ending!

"He found that they are all in one love
A love that despite all the emotions he put
Turned out to be no more than a virtual bank "

it all just flowed perfect! 5/5