An excellent poem, you certainly have a way with words, charm the birds from the trees, lol. 5/5

Awh, Mike, again, I love this poem. =) This is definitley getting a 5/5. Good job.

Excellent. It's good. I like the flow.
Good job, amazing job, keep it up, whoot
-Krystal[:

The only thing i would do is say mountain instead of mt. so that it doesn't look choppy! but other than that, i love it, beautiful heart!

Amazing...loved how it flowed together and how u expressed ur feelings...nice...

Reallu nice poem really liked how your comparing a girl to a rainbow really creative .keep writing

Again i really like your stucture of the poem.
thats how i like them..
i like the creativity of it all.
-alicia

Awwww this one is even more sweeter! i love it! i give you a 5/5!!! =p

Aww this poem is so amazingly beautiful!!!!!!
really amazing
keep it up 5/5