This poem at first it was a little hard to get the flow
but the meaning you got across its just needs a little more rhythm and its would be great...4/5..=)!!

Need to work the flow. the meaning comes through great. Keep trying I some time have to rework a poem more than 10 times before is sounds good.

I love this. The idea is presented in the title and then added to in detail within the poem. I especially like the line
"If tomorrow you feel lonely it's ok.
Just turn on your radio and hear our song"

5/5 Awesome!