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I like how you put together your things describibng your state&feelings and material things (especially in the beginning)
dreams+pillow, thoughts+blankets, words+comp.screen...
It makes your feelings so real in this poem
and the wording is beautiful
by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop
You have transferred your emotions in this poem quite well... I could feel the sadening words pierce my soul as I was reading it. Great job baby girl! keep up the good work! 5/5
by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
Great poem felt a great kinda rhythym in it great emotion you put into it keep up the good work
This poem was very emotional vey expressive. i love the flow and the detail you put into it. it was beautiful in every way. a very wisely worded poem. job well done. 5/5.