Comments : Hidden Truths and Broken Lies

  • 13 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    I like how you put together your things describibng your state&feelings and material things (especially in the beginning)
    dreams+pillow, thoughts+blankets, words+comp.screen...
    It makes your feelings so real in this poem

    and the wording is beautiful

  • You have transferred your emotions in this poem quite well... I could feel the sadening words pierce my soul as I was reading it. Great job baby girl! keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great poem felt a great kinda rhythym in it great emotion you put into it keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem was very emotional vey expressive. i love the flow and the detail you put into it. it was beautiful in every way. a very wisely worded poem. job well done. 5/5.