Good work, go on :)

This one is awesome too,

"Did I deserve?
Did I deserve all this?
Were your purpose to kill me
inside?
Congratulations boy,you did it right."

"Under the dark sky
So many tears I cry.
No.
We will not be together again.
Not now.Not today."

wow, these two parts were superb awesome

This is good. I think everyone can relate. Keep up the good work...5/5...xoxo

GREAT JOB ON THIS POEM...I CAN TRULY RELATE...THANKS FOR THE COMMENT.

Nice work..5/5..keep it up:)

So cute

especially i like the way u begin&end the poem:
"Snow was bright that day"
and
"Under the dark sky"

it makes the atmosphere of the poem change
and this picture and charm to this sad story

Lizaveta

Wow this is really one of ur bests
loved it
5/5

Really great poem. Glad you arent letting him play you. 5/5