Yeah, sweet poem... But last line doesn't make sense...

It was great the last line does make sense
its a wonderful poem darl :)
i liked it

tears

5/5

I somewhat agree with the two comments above. It's a very good write, although the last stanza throws me off just a leeeeeelte bit. BUT....all the emotion does come through, none the less. All in all, a very good love poem. Good job.