by Jean Predestin Jan 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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I love the way you look at me |
by Casey Lynn
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I loved this poem... but you might want to check your "your"s and change them to "you're"s. Line 8 needs to have a "you're" as well as 11 and 12. Wonderful work!!! It had a great beat to it. |