Oh wow, i really liked this, your word choice was amazing, i loved it, the flow was great and the rhyming was also very good. and the ending was also very perfect, a well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Very nice poem, good analogies. I think, however, the word brung should have been brought. Apart from that, 5/5

I love your choice of words... there was one awkward word when you used brung... i dont think thats a word, but great job otherwise! Loved the message it was very clear! Keep up it!
5/5

I thought it was really good. deep wih emotion. Thanks for your comment. glad you liked it!

Wow. i love your work the more i read it!

Wow...
this is a really good poem...
keep up the good work...

XOXOXO
Britt

It's beautiful...

Wow I loved it....but I love everything you write so...:-) 5/5

I never have been one for love poetry as it is so difficult for me to read through the filler words that so many poets use with the cliche style. You have surpassed that and intrigued me to read more love poetry. I enjoyed the style and hope to read more from you.
Thank You for sharing,
Kay

Under the tree of life
Which you have grown in me
The seed has grown eternal
Inside this earthly me

Morgan,

Such poetic words...this was the stanza I loved best:)
Btw..I think it is creative to invent a new word, lol.
Keep writing!

5/5 Ingrid