That was really good. Painted a very descriptive image.

To me it seems like living life in a big city, but kinda feelin trapped in it all. good job 5/5

Oh wow this shows sooo much emotions and the images i saw!!!! not to mention the fact that it flowed so beautifully! :) 5/5 my favorite part in all this poem was

I remember a far away time
When this moment, I felt, was mine
I remember a far away time
When you were mine

for everyone has had that in their lives! :)

Queen Ash