That was really good. I've lost people dear to me, but i've never really been able to write about it. nice job tho

Awww. I thought that was really sweet and touching. I really enjoyed reading it. It made my think of my grandmother. She's not gone yet, but it made me think about when she does. Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow, it's completely unique title...
I really love it.
Really impressed with your rhyme scheme...
Really well written and flowed very well...
5/5 without a doubt!!!

Aww such a sad poem I'm sorry for
your loss. Accepting someones death
is the hardest part, and you did a great
job with that. I think this poem should
be under family. But great job.
5/5
<3tay