I think that if you take out
AND EVER
the flow might fit a bit better
but it is your poem so you don't have to
thanks for the read

That was really good as well. Sounds like this person is really dear to you. I think everyone needs people like that in their lives. Especially if they've had to deal with a death.

From the title, I can feel that this poem is really sweet. Also, I really love your rhyme scheme. Overall it's well written poem. 5/5 definitely!!!

Aw a very sweet and passoniate
friendship poem. I really like the love
you showed for this person and how
much you care for htem.
WEll done.
5/5
<3tay

Awww, that was so sweet. You're really lucky to have a friend like that. I have a few friends like that. Well, we're actually growing apart.. but I think they would still be there for me if I needed them. The flow and rhymes were good. Maybe use some more metaphores or descriptive words? Haha, I'm trying to think of something to say so you can improve it, but really I like it how it is. Well, anyways, I loved it, and I think you did an amazingly wonderful job! :]

Keep writing!
Cayce