I'd call it shivers down my spine. i liked that line and it would be a good title. this was a really great poem, i felt as if i could relate to it exactly how you have wrote it too. i have a picture. i gaze at it often.

5/5 david

I like the poem
i dont think you need to add more
but if u do i look forward to it
great job
xx

I actually thought this was really good.. I know how you feel.. I really dont think you need to add anything else to this.. I think it's pretty much perfect the way it is.
Good Job 5/5