Comments : Better off

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I really liked this. Short, but sweet.
    Although I think this line:

    "I take the words from you I hear"

    would sound better as

    "I take the words I hear from you"

    Just my thoughts. still loved the poem.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Good write i like this one two

  • 15 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Short and sweet-very nice

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Again those moments that are treasured between two people can never be measured by another. We know the love that lives within us and for better or worse it will guide us and remind us of things to come. We will live from the love we have had and suffer from the hate.
    Beautiful write dear,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was awsome! i loved it! it showed a lot of emotion. wonderful writing! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dutch

    Wow
    5/5 from me.
    xxx