Wow.. powerful imagery there.. ur pretty good at this.. =)

Powerfully Wonderful

The imagery is there, as is the meaning. If you need to speak, I'm here, mama. ^^

-Ally <3

Wonderful

Very strong xxx

Powerful!
If you ever need anyone to talk to, Im here

I agree. The emotion in this poem is overpowering. It takes a good poet to write a poem this strong with only four lines. Congratulations. I can't wait to read more!

Wow, very good :D i like it alot...itz different, but in a good way!!

Wow I like this, it's good and I used to feel like that.

Very powerful words, no matter how simple they may be

really really good :)

Amy x

Nice, love the repetition, strong emotion. great poem

Powerful poem, real touching

This is a really good poem, although it's kind of short. It's really good though. Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

Holy dear mother of god. what else can one say