Really good poem i have to say that all your poems are really good you have a lot of talent .loved the poem ,it rymed and made sense and hope it gets better for you .

This is a really good poem. i like said in all of them i really injoy reading your work i cant wait until you have more.

Really good poem!!!
keep up the good work!

I really liked how you wrote that. The flow and rhythm was fantastic and the wording was great as well. All in all a wonderful job and I loved the way you expressed how you felt and the emotions, that was the best part. 5/5

Excellent write 5/5